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darksasuke
12-27-2007, 04:14 AM
I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek.
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me.
with those eyes I know so well
always serious, so deep and insightful
as though you're always in control
But not today
not now
Now you look so scared
like for once you don't have the answer
I gaze at you
looking deep into those hazel eyes
Hoping to understand
why you've said those things you did
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek because it was for you.

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w62/louiskoo_bi/sad.jpg

Catrina
12-27-2007, 06:06 PM
thats good except its from an Anime show :D

duh_fluffy_thing
01-12-2008, 04:13 PM
i think its really good proubly bc i hav never seen that anime showLOL!
but yeah it waz good

nami|shikuzu|hidden|tears
03-03-2008, 09:39 PM
its just a poem

not from an anime just a poem.

I love it tho :3

Mr.Keith
03-06-2008, 10:21 PM
i entered a poem contest and im waiting until the first week of may to get a reply saying if i was accepted :) or rejected :confused:

nami|shikuzu|hidden|tears
03-07-2008, 07:36 PM
o.O cool? and yes it was really good

nami|shikuzu|hidden|tears
03-10-2008, 01:31 AM
its not a friggen anime poem DX just a poem

bticomics
03-20-2008, 10:32 PM
Honestly, is it by you or from an anime show? :D It's great

nami|shikuzu|hidden|tears
04-23-2008, 05:31 PM
God Ppl Its Just A Poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tosan139
04-27-2008, 01:25 PM
Yea Its just a poem. And if its from an anime show which one becuase I think Its just a poem.

Tosan139
04-27-2008, 01:27 PM
Yea I like the poem. :D

Catrina
04-27-2008, 07:19 PM
Its from this Anime Show, I think it was called lovers cannot really remember, it got cancelled, this guy fell in love with an angel so he created about 1,000 poems for her. One of them was that one, except it wasn't exactly for her.

Tosan139
04-27-2008, 10:01 PM
I get it now. Thanks.

nami|shikuzu|hidden|tears
05-21-2008, 08:08 PM
Thank You For Agreeing With Me Xdd